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Offically Introducing Chloe
Shoot: Friday 13/4/07
She has been pretty sick over the past few months but I like the series that has come from this shoot there are some good workable shots in there.

This one I have been working on for the past day or two. I know there are more things I could do with it but I am sick of it now hehehe.Maybe ill edit it again later.
I was going to find a relevent artical to use in this but I could not find a suitable one so I wrote this myself. I know its a bit sketchy but hey I was trying to focus on the image :P

I was going to put more stuff in but I didnt want to make it look crowded.

Tell me what you think, if its too small to read tell me and ill change it to make it bigger
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So the idea here is to make it look like a magazine article?

The photo I think looks nice, don't really know what to advise you on it so I'll move onto the text

The overall format's great, the title's catchy and the red makes the important quotes stand out. Maybe change the font to a more neater font (like Times New Roman) and leave the fancier ones for the title and the quotes. The article should be justified not alligned left, it's just a neatness thing. Also make the title bigger so people know it's a title.

I hope that helps :)
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It helps quite a bit, Thankyou.

I have never made an artical like this before, so I tried to copy the style and layout out of a magaziene I had laying around. Im glad that the focus points stood out and thankyou for the feedback, it means a lot to me :)

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